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Wait...don't go. I'm sorry. Don't you trust me? It was an accident. I didn't mean...to hurt. Please. Come back. I'll be more careful. It's just...the claws. Not me. I would never, ever...would I? I do own the claws, true, but still....it was them. I just own them. It's not my fault. I had to. Please. If I hadn't, I would have...lost them. I need them. They love me. Can't you see?...I just carry out it's wishes. But, it's okay now. I'm done, well, they are. For now. You're safe. Why...don't you believe me? I'm sorry. But I can't stop. Nor can I tell you their reasoning. They won't let me. I wish I could, though. But it'll be worth it, you'll see. They need me too...so they can stay with me. They need sacrifice, to know I'm worthy. I'm sorry...please don't cry.
Actually a re-upload, I wrote this a few months ago.
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witch-ruby Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is awesome!!!!
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
Damn, looking back at this, I can't believe I wrote that. It's so trippy. Wtf me.
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witch-ruby Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIEK TRPIIY THOUGH!!!
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
:iconhippieplz: :iconsaysplz: Pass the marinara and risperidone plz.
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witch-ruby Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i spelled trippy wrong didnt i *face desk*
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
I don't think trippy is a real word. :iconderpplz:
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witch-ruby Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh well, I still spelled it wrong
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
FFF spelling doesn't matter in hippie angst world.
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SnowyCragrat Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Strangely I think it could be a cat that has hurt its owner.

Then again, other aspects suggest it could be a person.
It is an intriguing short story and a well written one at that.
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Writer
I wrote it during a panic attack a while back. It's hard to explain. But I suppose it could be taken many ways.
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SnowyCragrat Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Which is good in regards to both poetry and experimental ficton (such as this).
Even if it was not your initial intention: that is the result.
It is also something that fits the short story discipline well.
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Writer
True.
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa...sad! It sounds like Edward Scissorhands or something. Great writing!
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student Writer
XD I hadn't thought of that, but you're right. Thanks!
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theolivethief14 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lawl, you're welcome! :rofl:
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Old-Black-Hat Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! It leaves most aspects open but still manages to give a creepy quality. C:
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you, glad you enjoyed. c: I picture it being about a girl doing things to hurt someone for a boy, but it's a bit darker than that I suppose. Just one of those things that's up to the reader. ^_^
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Krimmro Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooooohh. This gave me goosebumps.
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Writer
Cool beans, glad you like it. ^_^
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Krimmro Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsweethugplz: I rather enjoyed it, yes :heart:
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lifeisgood4u Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Writer
^_^
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